Hello, this is Michael. Good job on your video. I really liked the music. You made some small, easy to make mistakes. I recommend running you text in a program that reads English first and it will tell you what spelling mistakes you have and some of the grammar mistakes. Changes are made in ´´quotes.´´
0:10 ...that you do before ´´you´´ do ´´a´´ sport
0:17 How ´´it´´ benefits you?
´´Mobility,´´ not movility
0:36 change unkles to ´´ankles´´
1:40 We move ´´our wrists in circles´´
1:46 ...from one sit to ´´the´´ other
2:57 Now, we run ´´as fast as´´ we can, ´´this is called a´´ sprint.
3:57 ...the child that ´´threw´´ the ´´´ball is put´´ in the center.
4:23 ´´This´´ game is so ´´fun´´ In English there is a difference between ´´fun´´ and ´´funny.´´ Funny just means that it makes you laugh. Fun is something that makes you feel like you are having a good time. Something can be fun but not funny. For example, if you like scary movies and go see one, you have fun watching it. However, it is not funny because it doesn´t make you laugh. If you do not like comedy movies then you can think a comedy is funny, but not fun. Of course, there can be things that are both fun and funny. Understand?
What a good job, Diego! Congratulations!
ResponderEliminarHello, this is Michael. Good job on your video. I really liked the music. You made some small, easy to make mistakes. I recommend running you text in a program that reads English first and it will tell you what spelling mistakes you have and some of the grammar mistakes. Changes are made in ´´quotes.´´
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...that you do before ´´you´´ do ´´a´´ sport
0:17
How ´´it´´ benefits you?
´´Mobility,´´ not movility
0:36
change unkles to ´´ankles´´
1:40
We move ´´our wrists in circles´´
1:46
...from one sit to ´´the´´ other
2:57
Now, we run ´´as fast as´´ we can, ´´this is called a´´ sprint.
3:57
...the child that ´´threw´´ the ´´´ball is put´´ in the center.
4:23
´´This´´ game is so ´´fun´´
In English there is a difference between ´´fun´´ and ´´funny.´´ Funny just means that it makes you laugh. Fun is something that makes you feel like you are having a good time. Something can be fun but not funny. For example, if you like scary movies and go see one, you have fun watching it. However, it is not funny because it doesn´t make you laugh. If you do not like comedy movies then you can think a comedy is funny, but not fun. Of course, there can be things that are both fun and funny. Understand?
4:39
change ´´yo´´ to ´´you´´
Great job.